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Post by Mundane Soul of a Thousand on Dec 28, 2006 20:37:42 GMT -5
OKay, I hate this story, and I think it's poorly written on my part. NOt something I'd normally do, unless it was one of my stupid short stories (which are the best, in my opinion).
But I often wonder what you guys think. What could I have done to make it better? What don't I need? Blah.
See this more as a constructive criticism.
Mark my words, this is the first time I'd ever take someones opinions/advice very seriously.
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