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Post by Tiana, eh? on Jul 6, 2005 3:25:40 GMT -5
DT, good. Jandalf, I'll let you get away without having DISCRIBED his tunic, just because I know your RPG skills are as good as mine and the other better members on this site. But when I ask for more clothing details, for everyone's information, I WANT WORDS, NOT PICTURES! Pictures are fine, but I don't tolerate just a picture for clothing reference. Sorry. (and technically, Master, you as an RPG admin didn't have to wait for me to proof read. Heh.) CJ: No, it's not enough. The rest of the character sheet is fine - I've decided I can be just a bit more leniant, but you just posted a picture for clothing reference. The reason I want people to write a couple sentences about their clothing is so they can discribe it in RPG. So. A couple sentenses about clothing appearance. Then I also need her PERSONALITY. You can't skip that, dearie. I'd also like to know what her race looks like, or is she human... *grins* Yes, I'm picky. But you don't get into RPG unless you fill out all the required pieces.
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CJ
Agent of Gondor
"oooh, what have we here?" "it's a man cub, it is."
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Post by CJ on Jul 6, 2005 19:24:47 GMT -5
will do. forgot about that whole personality thing. lol. edit: she looks like a human.
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Post by Faust-Dark Lord Reborn on Jul 7, 2005 16:50:22 GMT -5
((This is an SW adaption of my main fantasy RP character. Eowyn, Jandalf, Dun, and Shadow for sure should know who he is ;D.)) Real Name: Faustuss Lillum/ Darth Sallazar the Black (Title "Black" is self given) Nickname: Sal (only used by those who he is comfortable with, otherwise you'll start finding it hard to breath) Title?: Master Age: 27 Species: Human (My first human character) Height: 6' Weight: 190 pnds --Hair--: Color: White Style: Very long, sleek hair that goes down to the middle of his back. Eyes: Bright green Gender: Male Handiness: Left --Identifying marks--: Tattoos: None on face but he's covered in them under his clothes. Scars: None Other: Nope Homeworld: Yavin IV Alignment: EVIL!!! Political Affiliation: Sith (Go figure?) --Clothing--: Tunic color/style: Black tunic that cuts off at the elbows. It has interweaving silver designs around the sleeves. Leggings, pants, skirt-- color/style: Black and quite loose. Has the same trim as his tunic. Cloak, robe? Color and style: Classic sith cloak, has a red inner lining. Footwear. Style/color: Boots with nice big silver buckles. Hat/hood. Color/style: Darth Sideous style. Weapon: Lightsaber Force User Inventory: A starship called "The Despair" and his evil lair (where I haven't figured out yet). His lightsaber, apprentice, and communicator. Personality: Brooding, bitter, and dark Sallazar is one of the galaxies most evil sith. He heard of the Jedi hunter Grevious, taking the mentality to heart, taking a sick pleasure from frightening and disposing of Jedi. He feeds off of other's fear, anger, sadness, using it to make himself feel better about his problems. That leads to his actually seeking to cause havoc and chaos. He's sociopath (he care nothing about others, usually, there may be exceptions) and his main goal in life is his own gratification and revenge. Skills: He's an exceptional lightsaber fighter, especially in theory. This allows him to perfect his lightsaber style, even though he seeks to create a purely Sith style of fighting. He is also cunning, able to manipulate others without the force, though it can help. Weaknesses: He is very dark, often being consumed by his emotions. This leads to often short battles against Jedi, whether in his favor or not. Another weakness is women, any non-jedi woman flirting with him will draw his attention, somewhat to his annoyance he can't overcome this stupid trait. He also has an addiction Rylothian spice, which he also can’t overcome. --History:-- Mother: Unknown Occupation: Jedi (fallen or expelled) Father: Unknown Occupation: Polititian Anything notable about childhood?: He was a jedi who fell because of his addiction. It started out as a mistake, intaking the spice by accident, then he became addicted immediately. He tried getting rid of the addiction through the ways of the Jedi yet couldn't, so he at first indulged his addiction, which quickly started to kill him. His obsession with it contradicted the Jedi code so an intervention was attempted. The Jedi locked him up and made sure he wasn't even close to Rylothian spice. Faustuss (which was his name at that time) was so heavily dependant on the spice that he eventual turned to the dark side, convinced that the Jedi were trying to kill him and that they had no idea the pain he was experiencing. He later took on the title Sallazar the Blackened Jedi, then to Sallazar the Black. Lover/married?: None Occupation, if known: N/A Children?: (names) Nope Character portrait: FOR JEDI AND SITH ONLY: Strongest Force strength: Force choke Favorite power: Force lightening Other Force powers used sometimes?: Life tap Weakest Force point: Mind dominate (he sees no point when a mind trick would do) Tendency to what lightsaber fighting style?: Form IV: Ataru. Acrobatic and swift, think of Qui Gon, Palpatine, and Yoda. But he's added a dark side mentality to Ataru, using sweeping attacks, stabs, physical blows, and Dun möch (the sith tradition of taunting and using the force to hurl objects at a foe). He also likes the saber throw technique. Lightsaber color: Red ((Hope that’s okay, if anybody has any suggestion/ plot bunnies/ corrections I'm open))
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Post by Jandalf on Toast on Jul 7, 2005 17:32:54 GMT -5
Looking good. I can't say I've ever seen a Sith with bright greed eyes before. (grins) Suits him, perhaps. Heh heh. Yeah, I know, it's green. But yup. All systems go. Might be good if you described the tattoos, but I hope the RPG won't come to a point where he has to show them off. (rolling of eyes)
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Post by Faust-Dark Lord Reborn on Jul 7, 2005 17:38:12 GMT -5
Yeah well, with my reputation... lol Nah, I doubt it would come to that, maybe if he went swimming. " Look the Dark Lord of the Sith is doing the backstroke" heh Yeah, I was just a little worried about the Ryloth spice addiction.
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Post by Jandalf on Toast on Jul 8, 2005 9:57:03 GMT -5
It serves as a good backstory, methinks, and might also serve well for a plot bunny if another character ever catches wind of it...
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Post by Faust-Dark Lord Reborn on Jul 8, 2005 15:06:08 GMT -5
1 question: Is Ryloth Spice inhaled? or eaten? I'm not sure. (I was contimplating death sticks but I read somewhere that 1 stick can cause death, not a very good thing for a plot *puff* *dies* *end of story* heh)
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Post by Jandalf on Toast on Jul 8, 2005 17:22:19 GMT -5
Meh, cigarettes are called cancer sticks - that taken into consideration, I haven't yet heard of a case where a single one caused cancer. But one never knows with deathsticks. Heh heh. I think Ryloth spice was ingested, but don't quote me on that.
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Post by Tiana, eh? on Jul 9, 2005 1:23:02 GMT -5
One more weakness, CJ, and you're in. My rules are that you have to have three weaknesses (one being emotional) and three or four skills listed... (one being emotional again) I don't know if I listed that in the rules... but I know I listed the proper character sheet. I'll agree with Jandalf on the ingesting thing... I seem to recall a scene for that. As a comment: JANDALF AND CY CAN BOTH ACCEPT CHARACTER SHEETS. So can Celebrian. You do not need me, just one of them, if I'm not around... And, yes, yes, YES, I do have a plot bunny... if you can change your surname to a conjoined name, Fausty... *careful and wicked grin* I know who your parents are. (You HAD to say "fallen or expelled Jedi" for mother...)
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Post by Faust-Dark Lord Reborn on Jul 9, 2005 14:07:25 GMT -5
Sure, give it to me in an PM.
And I thought it would be a plot bunny starter for his parents to be an expelled/ fallen jedi.
However, Fausty is one name I despise!!! Stop using that! *raspberry* Pbbbbttthhhh!
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Post by Tiana, eh? on Jul 9, 2005 22:22:33 GMT -5
Awww... Fausty-Wawsty then. *sticks out tongue*
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CJ
Agent of Gondor
"oooh, what have we here?" "it's a man cub, it is."
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Post by CJ on Jul 10, 2005 22:33:29 GMT -5
how's that?
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Morndakiél
Agent of Gondor
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Post by Morndakiél on Jul 11, 2005 17:06:13 GMT -5
lolol....I'm partering with him, one way or another. Real Name: Thrait Yn Nickname: none Title?: Darth Age: 25 standard Species: Sarkan In this pic the Sarkan's the tall one on the right; www.wizards.com/starwars/images/uaa/49188_CN.jpgHeight: 6'5' Weight: 225lbs Sarkans have no hair. Eyes: blue-black Gender: male Handiness: Left --Identifying marks--: Tattoos: None Scars: None Other: a network of nanotech filaments runs down his left arm, adding to it an unpenetrable (tho non-cortosis) shield, serrated and irregular spikes, and a spindly third arm & hand beginning at the elbow of the real arm. Thrait uses this as his dominant hand so the claws of his natural ones can be kept sharp and long. Homeworld: Datha, a moon of the Sarkan birth world Alignment: evil Political Affiliation: Sith --Clothing--: Tunic color/style: Sleeveless and tattered blue-black tunic Leggings, pants, skirt-- color/style: short, leather pants (over all of this is traditional Sarkan armor like in the picture; a medly of reinforced leather and spikes.) Cloak, robe? Color and style: short, black cloak loose around the neck, arms and head but closer to the lower body and allowing for his tail Footwear. Style/color: Nothin' Hat/hood. Color/style: Sith-ish cowl with torn edges Weapon: Lightsaber, claws, tail Force User Inventory: lightsaber, some specialized medical equipment, a small ship called TorshockPersonality: primitively angry and harsh, findin gladness in battle. He's the worst of the stereotypical reptilian alien; confusing to outsiders, cold-hearted, and strong to a fault. He was never formally trained in the Force but know the Jedi and Sith as great legends he seeks to emulate/destroy (depending on which one you're talking about, and what mood he's in.) He uses the Force as an uncontrolled extension of his own animalistic strength. Skills: Languages; Basic, Bocce, Sarkan, some of trade languages like Huttese and...what the Squibs speak. Shouting, and lightsaber fighting. His style is very much his own and utilizes his claws and tail as much as the lightsaber held in his third, mechanical hand. Weaknesses: Going berserk in a fight, not being the brightest being out there, not being able to hide at all cause he's very conspicuous. He doesn't know much about the Force yet. His anger can get him carried away into messy situations and cloud his thinking with rather primal perogatives. --History:-- Mother: Unknown Occupation: some sort of spacer Father: Chthyd Yn Occupation: prize fighter Anything notable about childhood?: He was raised in the underworld of Datha by his father, who raised him to follow in his tradition of fighting for money. Thrait tried out bounty hunting too, thereby finding his skill with the Force, and learned all he could about it from common people's knowledge of the Jedi/Sith on that planet. History: he got a ship, and fell in with a fallen Jedi (Faust's mother? *shrug) on Nar Shadda. She taught him lightsaber combat but wasn't proficient in the dark side either, so she only taught him how to harness the rage and use it with whatever power came to mind. The Force, she told him, could do anything. . Lover/married?: None Character portrait: I'll draw one up someday FOR JEDI AND SITH ONLY: Strongest Force strength: Force rage Favorite power: Rage Other Force powers used sometimes?: Increased stamina, levitation, choke/grip Weakest Force point: He doesn't know a lot of available powers cause of his 'training'. That's the weakness if it works. Tendency to what lightsaber fighting style?: something like teras kasi, with the lightsaber held in the third hand and using his two other hands for slashing with claws. Lightsaber color: Red
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Post by Skye Muad'Dib on Jul 11, 2005 23:39:11 GMT -5
Ooooh.
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karma
Padawan Learner
The darkness will consume you, I will make sure
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Post by karma on Jul 12, 2005 0:36:51 GMT -5
Real Name: Trowa Barton Nickname: Zek(changed his name and is only known as this) Age: 24 Species: Human Height: 5'6" Weight: 121 --Hair--: Color: Normal, brown. Dyed Purple. Style: See sig Eyes: Aqua, with a slight hint of jade near the center Gender: Male Handiness: ambidextrous --Identifying marks--: Tattoos: None Scars: None Other: Has his lip pierced Homeworld: Naboo Alignment: Chaotic Evil Political Affiliation: Sith --Clothing--: (Tendency to wear what kind of clothes.) Shirts- White and Black Button ups, With darker colored shirts over them Leggings, pants-- color/style: Baggy dark pants with at least 6 pockets Cloak Color and style: Robe: Flowing and a deep crimson. Cloak: A shade of purple so deep it is near black, with a hood big enough to hang low over his face if he tilts his head a slight bit Footwear. Style/color: When he has to wear shoes, he wears a simple design just enough to keep his feet protected Hat/hood. Color/style: see cloak Gloves: He wears a pair of fingerless gloves that are black. Weapon: Knives, vials of poison, and a few thermals every now and then Lightsaber color: Have not acquired one as of yet. Force User Inventory: His weapons, roughly three hundred creds, and a single neck less that is a half heart, broken down the middle. Personality: He is mostly quiet at first. He is the kind that would stare off thinking of happy times long past. He is quick to grow attached to others. He hits the emotional extremes a lot. He is happiest when he is alone and able to think without disruption. After he loosens up around people he trys to be funny, but his sense of humor is usally not something people want to hear. Skills: Acrobatics, slicing, fighting(hand to hand and with blades), very good with empathy. (reading others emotions and intentions) Weaknesses: He is steadily losing his grip on reality. When he becomes good friends with someone, he may get to attached. he will do anything for them to the point of suicidal action. Sometimes he hears voices in his head, he never Denys them and does as they say with hopes of them bring back his family. --History:-- Mother: Jania Barton-dead- Father: Jonathan Barton-dead Occupation: Was a prominent man on naboo, was up to become senator but was assassinated Anything notable about childhood?: Basic history: He was born and raised on Naboo. His life was normal and a very good one. His father had a good job and him being an only child meant he got most things he wanted. He went to private schools and excelled in computer use. Some days he would go out to the Marsh's on Naboo and swing from the trees. His body was slim and flexible so he was able to do a lot of things most boys his age couldn't do anymore. When he was 17 he met Jayden. They fell in love and got married a short while later. She had a daughter a bit later. They named her lea. Life was good for him, and his family. His father manged to get him a job at the local security firm as their computer maintenance guy. The job was OK, but he wanted more and soon left the planet. His family and him arrived on Coruscant. He was able to get a job, although shady a good one. He joined up with a small group of guys and they planned out a robbery on a local bank. Before it could happen they turned on him, he got word of his parents deaths a few days before it happened. He got home to tell his family and he found them there...waiting for him. He was forced to watch them kill his wife and take his daughter away. He broke free of their grasp and ran, knowing they would kill him He got away and off the planet going back to naboo. Currently he is looking around their to find out who killed his parents. Lover/married?: Was married. She was killed as was his daughter. Occupation, if known: None currently. Children?: Lea Barton Character Pic:
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Post by Jandalf on Toast on Jul 12, 2005 17:04:57 GMT -5
izzy: could you list what languages he does speak/understand in the Skills section? It'll help to clarify and whatnot should someone approach him to talk. (grins) Or get killed, in any case. And can his anger act against him as a weakness? It sounds like it, from what you've posted, and if so, could you put it in the Weaknesses section?
karma: I'd like a little more under Personality, as what you've put is rather concise. Also, does he know his daughter was killed, or was that after she was taken away, leaving him to guess?
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karma
Padawan Learner
The darkness will consume you, I will make sure
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Post by karma on Jul 12, 2005 19:14:44 GMT -5
I put a bit more under personality. He doesn't know they killed her so he is still searching for her as well.
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Post by Jandalf on Toast on Jul 12, 2005 21:06:35 GMT -5
Mm...still a bit scant, but I think you've got a good idea of who you want him to be. Approved.
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CJ
Agent of Gondor
"oooh, what have we here?" "it's a man cub, it is."
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Post by CJ on Jul 12, 2005 21:32:38 GMT -5
can you look at mine.... please. Darth Tempy's waiting.
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Post by Jandalf on Toast on Jul 13, 2005 13:55:32 GMT -5
Expansion on Personality would be preferable...a few notes on what traits make her difficult to get close to, etc. Insecurity? Something like that? The good memory would probably go under Skills, too.
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