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Aug 22, 2006 16:28:01 GMT -5
Post by relientkelly on Aug 22, 2006 16:28:01 GMT -5
it's kind of confusing 'cause I didn't want to say exactly what I was talking about. and it's not really a poem, it started out as one, but I'm currently writing some music to it. sooo.. tell me whatcha think. "I"[/u] I'm tired of meaningless I-Love-You's. I'm tired of feeling the way I do. I'm sick of going in circles. Can you help me? 'Cause I love you. I can't help it. Being the way I am. I need you to see through my skin. Let me know what you think. Honestly. Let me know what you see. Inside of me. I love you. I don't need you. What is this all about? You have to want something. Otherwise, no sense is made. I don't want your sympathy. I don't care. But everytime you leave, I'll scream again. I'm okay, I'll be fine. Just ask me one more time. Are you okay? Are you fine? I'll tell you the truth this time. Tell me what you think. Honesty. Tell me what you see. In this heart of mine. It's on my sleeve, you can see. Everything inside of me. I am open. I am scared. I am willing. To come here. Let me know what you think. Honestly. Let me know what you see. Inside of me. I need you. I love you?
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Aug 22, 2006 16:37:16 GMT -5
Post by Padawan Yakhana Skie on Aug 22, 2006 16:37:16 GMT -5
This kinda reminded me of a Used song. Just a little bit. I'm not one for lyrics. But this isn't bad. I'm not a fan of rhyming either. Free verse all the way haha. I hope the music goes good. Best wishes!
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Aug 22, 2006 20:03:45 GMT -5
Post by relientkelly on Aug 22, 2006 20:03:45 GMT -5
haha yep. thank yas.
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