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Post by Tiana, eh? on Feb 1, 2005 3:03:33 GMT -5
Eh... came from nowhere... would be better if I could find a way to stick the tune to it, but I can't make midis yet. Heh.
It's somewhat based on Tiana's present situation, I think.
You said you'd always be there, You said you'd never give me reason to despair... Well, someone tell me why I'm dying, Someone tell me why I'm crying... Someone tell me why you're no longer here for me...
When you look into my eyes, tell me, who do you see? You told me I was someone who'd always seem free. Well, big surprise, I'm lost now-- without a home, Everywhere I look-- all I do is roam... Why did you abandon me to this endless fate?
When I look forward, we no longer can relate. You've left me here, when will my pain abate? Someone tell me why I'm hurting, This fate I've fell to is very disconcerting... Where did you go when I needed you most?
Well, now for once, my life is toast, Look at me-- what do you see-- a ghost. A shadow of who I used to be, of what I was. And you know why I am, all because...
Because you left me on my own. Because I am without a home. But wait, I'm not dead yet, By all means, I've paid my dept. Who am I, who are you? For once I have no clue... I'm not lost yet, just wanderin'... And not all who wander are lost.
But that doesn't mean I'm not dying, crying... Trying to come back to you.
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Post by Dûncariel is Dead. on Feb 1, 2005 19:48:19 GMT -5
Wow. Good meter, good rhyme scheme. Great relief from Whitman alll day....
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Post by Tiana, eh? on Feb 3, 2005 2:16:30 GMT -5
...I wasn't trying for good meter, or anything like that. Really. I don't even know HOW to rhyme things well...
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Post by Master Warious on Feb 3, 2005 12:06:48 GMT -5
*sniff*
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