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Post by Tiana, eh? on May 23, 2005 16:19:09 GMT -5
Muad'dib. You can't be half human, if that's what your sheet implied. And I've never heard of Daneth for a planet. If you're not human, I'd appeciate a discription more of what you look like, in more depth than the sheet allows, just because I don't know what a Daneth looks like, and I don't even know if they're a real race in SW...
Put more discription into your clothes. It doesn't have to be much, but if people don't start being more in depth, I'll reedit the character sheet. I want to know what color your tunic is, your leggings are, your robe is. What your boots look like. Whether you carry anything else on your belt. Any other accesories.
Put some emotional weaknesses, not just physical. The physical weakness is fine, if you remember it's there, but I also want to know your emotional strengths and weaknesses. Do you tend to get angry with people fast? Are you loyal? Etc. A bit more of that in the personality and weaknesses would be nice.
Oh, and you can't start with lightsabers unless you start as a Jedi Knight or Master. Otherwise you'll have to RPG through the planets in whatever way you wish, and find a Master yourself who'll train you to make a lightsaber. We go more realistic, you can't just POOF, and have a Master. Good luck at finding someone to train you. *grins*
And name your ship, you'll be fine. Edit and you're welcome in.
Kar.
Telos is not an acceptable planet, as it's not existant at the time of this RPG. It's a game planet. I'll allow it, since I don't know if it's destoryed, but I'd rather a more correctly timed planet.
Again, as I said to Muad'dib, more discription of the clothing. I want to know what your garb looks like.
What color is your lightsabers, and it's spelt vibroblade.
What's your rank in the Sith/Dark Jedi, and who was your Master, since you can't just appear with a lightsaber without having been trained. What do you do, if you don't have a Master anymore. Do you sell your services as a bounty hunter, perhaps?
What happened to "personality"? Can't accept anyone missing a part of the profile.
More indepth on the skills, I don't understand what you mean. And overconfidence is fine for a weakness, though I'd like one physical weakness as well, or one more emotional weakness.
Thank you for posting to join. Amend your profiles a bit more, and you're welcome to join! Muad'dib, if you want to join as a Jedi Knight, go ahead... Kar is welcome as a Sith Master.
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Post by Kar Vastor on May 24, 2005 8:39:56 GMT -5
Real name: Xanatos Crion Nickname: Xanatos age: 26 Species:Human Sex:Male Hair:Black Homeworld:Telos Personality: Sith Master, Sith Bounty Hunter Alignment:Evil Clothing:Long black cape that goes to the ankles, black tunic, black pants, and black boots Weapons:Dual Lightsabers, Vibroblade, and Vibroshields Color of Lightsabers: Green and Orange Trained by: Qui-Gon Jinn Inventory:10 bacta canisters, a datapad, and 5 probe droids Posessions:A stolen Jedi starfighter Skills:Able to spy and kill without being noticed. Able to track down just about anything. Weaknesses:overconfidence Emotional weaknessess:Angers quickly.
The planet Telos wasn't totally destroyed. Most of it's natural resources were though. What time would this RPG be in? Would this Character sheet work for the New Republic RPGs too?
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Post by Skye Muad'Dib on May 24, 2005 16:52:45 GMT -5
I modified my character sheet, *see page 11*.
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Post by Tiana, eh? on May 24, 2005 22:11:20 GMT -5
All right... Muad'dib, you can jump in now. As a Jedi Knight, you'll have to train someone, but don't feel you have to immediately. *shrugs* Take some time to get to know the RPG first.
Kar. I'll accept Telos as a homeplanet, I suppose, but trained by Qui-Gon... no. That Xanatos is dead. Unless you wish to write about a one page long history about how on earth he managed to survive, and then I can accept that you're THE Xanatos. And I wouldn't mind it either, if you want to explain how he's still alive. This RPG is at about the same time as... um... AotC, I think. But it's AU in parts, so... yeah. Feel free to change things as long as they're explained. A BIT of change is allowed, anyway. *grins sheepishly* I've put up with it thus far...
For the NR RPG, you'd have to change your training to another character, as it's far to far ahead for you to have been trained by Qui-Gon, and to be Xanatos. You could be named Xanatos though, if you wanted, in the NR one. And Telos, by that point, I think would've been drained. With a bit of editing, you can apply to the NR one with nearly the same character sheet though.
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Post by Kar Vastor on May 25, 2005 3:08:55 GMT -5
Ahh poo, ya know what. I'm just going to make a NR Char and stick o those RPGs for now.
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Post by Tiana, eh? on May 27, 2005 21:44:19 GMT -5
For a character that appeared as an NPC, but I quickly realized he'd need the full blown character sheet. *shrugs* Too much background. Anyway. If I need him when he's not interacting with Taania, I'll login and use Anakin Skywalker as an RPG alias.
Consider this sheet accepted, as I'm the admin. *grins* Unless another admin has a problem with this one, that is...
Wow... an evil from me...
Real name: Eliaith Vilranar Nickname: Call him anything besides Lord Vilranar or Eliaith (he doesn't mind the first name basis from commoners) and he'll strangle you. Age: 39 Species: Human Sex: Yes. Just kidding... HE'S male. Hair: Color: Dark brown with gray starting to show in the roots. Style: Shoulder length and slightly wavy, the left half loops down nearly to cover his eyes in places, and it's parted a bit off to the right side. Eyes: Dark violet Skin tone: Very light, as if he never enters the sunlight, but his face does have sunmarks... Height: 6"7 Homeworld: Umm... (curses self for borrowing a Malchani character for this RPG. Tempted to say Kuat, as it's the only planet she can think of with stuck up people... gives up after searching a map for a better planet than Broleas) Kuat Personality: Sith Lord. He can weave anyone in circles by speaking in metaphors, but he rathers get straight to the point. He doesn't like to tell anyone anything they don't need to know, and certainly isn't stupid. He won't reveal anything that he doesn't think is important. He likes to impose himself on people, using his height to an advantage (Yes, Master, think Elachi evil...) to stare down on people and otherwise intiminate them. He doesn't like being in large crowds of people, tending to draw off to the side and stare at them under his hood and thick eyebrows. Alignment: Dark. That DOESN'T mean he's EXACTLY evil... Clothing: Long black robe that drapes down around his feet and leather boots. He wears a non-discript gray tunic and pants underneath that, similar to any farmer's wear or perhaps Jedi, but not revealing at all in their rank. Typical utility belt. His robe has a overhanging hood like Aragorn's. Weapons: He IS the weapon. *grins* Carries two lightsabers, a blaster, and a vibroblade normally. He doesn't need explosives to make someone hurt... Color of Lightsabers: Silver and purple Inventory: All above noted weapons, a medpac, a datapad, a comlink, aqua breather, automatic grappling set, binders... Posessions: Ship which class I don't know named the Harbringer (I've wanted to do that for ages...) (and I'll get a class for it later). Protocool droid which he won in a bet called 5-DC0, or Fivedee. The entire galaxy (snrk. J/k). Skills: Able to talk anyone or anything into doing anything with time, able to confuse anyone. Very intiminating. Incredibly skilled with a lightsaber and a sharp shot with a blaster. Does not believe in cliché solutions, making him very dangerous. Weaknesses: He lacks trust in anything or anyone, usually insisting on doing everything himself because of this. He's not very skilled with any heavy weapons, more focused on finesse rather than getting the job done. He tends to procrastinate a lot as well. He has too much faith in his own abilities to get everything done right, often bringing about situations in which he gets into a lot of trouble. He likes to taunt people, so he'll hang around a bit too long once in a while as well.
There.
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Eliaith Vilanar
Padawan Learner
You'll know when you need to. It's as simple as that. Do I make myself clear?
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Post by Eliaith Vilanar on May 27, 2005 22:45:49 GMT -5
All right, NEVER MIND ABOVE POST WHEN I SAID I'D USE ANAKIN... *shrugs* Yes, I'm Tiana. Yes, you may check my IP address. Yes, if you are staff and check my email or IP, it will belong to me. That is that.
I couldn't use a lightside alias for my evil, could I?
*bows and withdraws*
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Ariane Neqayr
Sithly Elf
..what lies beyond the truth...?
Posts: 32
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Post by Ariane Neqayr on May 28, 2005 3:37:29 GMT -5
Here, I'll try my hand at this. Real Name: Ariane Éathéna Peranith Nickname: Ara, Éthaa, 'Dann Age: 13 Species: Human Height: 5"10 Weight: 115 Hair: Silver Eyes: Grey Sex: Female Homeworld: Alderaan Alignment: Good at the moment Clothing: Stylized white shirt and pants, silver robes, silver rimmed navy belt, navy vest, navy headband Weapon: None of the above? Ariane prefers fighting on the moment, rather than using a weapon-- unless, of course, she can get ahold of a lightsaber... Force User. Jedi wannabe, to be more exact. Anyone looking for a Padawan? Inventory: Watch, small medkit, datapad Posessions: The Force, mentioned datapad, translator disc, anything she can get her hands on... Personality: She tends to be impulsive, acting on the moment rather then thinking things through at all. She's easygoing, and not a challenge to talk to, however, making friends with her is a different story. Shes not willing to let people trust her easily, or the other way around. Ariane gets frustrated easily, being an easy angered person. She would've made a great Sith... Skills: She's good at close fighting, though not with a sword/lightsaber/blaster, fists only. She's also quite skilled at sensing things, having a slight measure of foresight, and a danger sense. Weaknesses: Because of her attunment with the Force, if she was in a ysilamiri bubble she'd feel helpless, drained. She has some vision problems, and often relys on the Force to guide her there, though she doesn't show it. Ariane is also pathetic at swordfighting, and other weapons-related fighting, though that might change if she was trained, either Jedi OR Sith. Her impulsive nature is also a weakness, she tends to act without thinking. Long enough for you, lol? I should think it's good. Accept me someone! Anyone need a Padawan? Can I rewrite my character sheet and try again, plz? i know that one was acceptable, but i don't like it much. there's a few errors. i've been rping on other sites so i don't think i'd be able to write her like this anyway. seemz i stole one of your character names, Eowyn. can i still use her?
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Post by Tiana, eh? on May 31, 2005 0:35:07 GMT -5
Go ahead and rewrite, and... *makes a face* Yeah, you can use Ariane, as long as she's not a Calthye, Elass, or Kyrie. Snrk... *laughs suddenly and randomly* But if you DO use her, you'll be the target of a rather convulted plotline merely for the sake of amusing myself and the RPer who plays Elachi Kyrie on this RPG, you realize...
See PMs. *cackles randomly*
Yeah. ANYWAY...
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Ariane Neqayr
Sithly Elf
..what lies beyond the truth...?
Posts: 32
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Post by Ariane Neqayr on May 31, 2005 1:28:12 GMT -5
Hehehehe. i'll play into your convulted ploting, i suppose, just don't expect me to be the same as your Ariane is. <grin> but we will see. a'sides, i feel like hiking my rank.
Real Name: Ariane Neqayr Nickname: Aria Age: 28 Species: Human (muahahahaha) (what was that about Wookiee toe fungus?) Height: 5"0 Weight: 115 Hair: Dark brown, slightly wavy. Its SUPPOSE to be dark brown. But she has silver highlights. Eyes: Amber ^.^ Sex: Female Homeworld: Alderaan
Alignment: Good. For the time. BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA... sorry.
Clothing: Slightly styalized knee length white tunic and pants in the basic Jedi style, but a looser and less covering fabric. Brown robe, brown belt, brown vest, and black calf-high boots. Wears a headband to keep her hair out of her eyes.
Weapon: Amber lightsaber. But she's not particularly the universe's best with a lightsaber, even though she's a practicer of the 4th form of lightsaber fighting. Her fingernails also could class as weapons.
Force User. Jedi Master. No, I'm not Force-sensitive. (rolls eyes)
Inventory: Cyronometer (sp?), small medkit, datapad...
Posessions: The Force, mentioned datapad, translator disc, carry-all sack anything she can get her hands on... which tends to be a lot of stuff... and not exactly gotten through legit manners all of the time...
Personality: Don't ask her questions, don't comment on her height, don't look at her for too long... and you'll be all right. You can talk to Ariane fairly easily, though she's often a bit distant, tending to think about the future too much, and let that distract her into meaningless babble. But don't let a talkative personality lead you astray. She's nearly impossible to break through to, and actually have a conversation with on any detail. She's quite secretive, though vocal about her opinions and stubborn as a Kenobi in want of food. If she doesn't like you, you'll know. And if she thinks that the strange colored speeder over there looks a bit taller than the rest of them though the strange colored skies do cause an odd offbalance... well... you'll know.
She takes her height quite personally. Do not pick on her height. The last person who did, she threatened to cut his legs off. Do not attempt to push her around. Or carry her around, for that matter. She will A) Bite you. B) Kick you. C) Use her fingernails. D) If all else fails, scream.
She has been dubbed evil by many, and annoying by far more.
Skills: Being dreadfully annoying. Being exeptionally vocal. Healing. (well, really) Making idle threats. She's quite attuned to the world around her, giving her an incredible sense of what's going to happen-- foresight, really.
Weaknesses: Because of her attunment with the Force, if she was in a ysilamiri bubble she'd feel helpless, drained. She's quite awful beyond belief with a lightsaber. An acceptionally talented non-Force-sensitive could probably beat her in a duel. Her defence when it comes to darts or blaster shots makes up for the weakness in combat, though. Her stubbornness to yield could also class as a weakness, as this means she frequently gets into fights. She's quite impusive, and acts without thinking sometimes-- trusting too much in foresight.
Gooooooooooooooooood enough?
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Post by Tempest on Jun 1, 2005 16:28:42 GMT -5
Real Name: Vash Keljon Nickname: Vash, Darth Ashon Age: unknown Species: Kiffar Height: 1.89 meters Weight: 150 lbs. Hair: Black, long midway down his back, and tied in loose pony at neck. Eyes: hazel Sex: male Homeworld: Kiffu Alignment: Dark Clothing: Black robes, like what darth maul wears. Weapon: two red lightsabers Force User Inventory: datapad, Posessions: security and combat droid AF-13, ships, Avenger and Shade. Several labs at secret locations which contain clones for him to embody if someone kills him. Personality: Sometimes quick to anger. Has a flair for the theatrical and is brave. Skills: Force sense, he can sense things through the force from great distances, lightsaber combat. Weaknesses: Is cocky and sometimes arrogant. Sometimes, when he sense’s things in the force, he’ll lose his concentration and sometimes even black out.
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Kaiya
Agent of Gondor
"No one is beneath redemption..."
Posts: 185
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Post by Kaiya on Jun 2, 2005 23:24:13 GMT -5
Real Name: Vera Solaris Nickname: Vera Age: 18 Species: Miraluka Height: 5’7” Weight: 120 lbs Hair: Straight and white, usually worn down Eyes: Solid white without pupils or irises (a trait of all Miralukas) Skin: Fair Sex: Female Homeworld: Alphredies Alignment: Good Clothing: Most frequently seen in simple, white robes, with a dark violet cloak that usually hides her whole body from view. Her feet are covered by thick, gray, leather boots. She keeps the hood of her cloak pulled up over her head almost all the time, and she also wears a band of white cloth over her unseeing eyes, hiding them from view. Weapon: Vibrosword Force User or Non-Force User: Force User Inventory: Vibrosword, med kit, a holocron containing a recording of her parents Posessions: None Personality: Vera carries the typical Miralukan personality traits. She has no interest in her own welfare, wealth, or glory. She is thoughtful and considers options carefully before making decisions. Once she commits herself to something, she never turns away from it. She’s often quiet and aloof, sometimes seen as rude by more talkative and outgoing people. While calm and reflective on the outside, inside she is often filled with turbulent emotions, often resulting from the pain or suffering of the world around her. Being a Miraluka, she has only seen the world through the Force, as all Miralukas are born blind but gifted with Force vision, and so she has always been connected to the flow of the world around her. Also, since she can only see people through the Force, she is often more in tune with their true will and emotions, unable to see the physical expressions that people hide behind. Skills: Excels in Force healing and meditation Weaknesses: Vera has had no real training to speak of, so some of her Force abilities are extremely weak, especially those dealing with combat. Also, her self-sacrificial ways often get her into trouble since she places no real value on her own life.
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Post by Skye Muad'Dib on Jun 5, 2005 14:10:40 GMT -5
I tried drawing what I thought Channi looked like.... what do you guys think? I don't know why, but the [/img] thing won't work for tinypic. tinypic.com/5o6mar
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Post by Tiana, eh? on Jun 5, 2005 15:48:59 GMT -5
All of those are fine. Accepted. *shrugs* And the drawing's good. You should use a bit heavier of paper for coloring, though, and do several layers. You can come up with stronger colors: images5.theimagehosting.com/Willowcropped.jpg (it looks better unscanned. The computer didn't interpet it right, mind you... it lessened the contrast of colors. Yeah, I drew her for another RPG character. I'm open to trying to draw any character you have, if you want. I just might not get it done very fast.) (gotta post my portrait of Taania...) You did good on the clothes, though. Next time, take a break before doing a background, and take a bit more time on it. It could've looked really cool in the background too.
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Post by Skye Muad'Dib on Jun 5, 2005 18:50:36 GMT -5
Thank you. I will take your advice.
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Post by sithhunter on Jun 5, 2005 18:50:47 GMT -5
Real Name: Grievous
Nickname: None
Age: Unknown
Species: Unknown
Height: 1.904 meters
Weight: 375
Hair: none
Eyes:Gold and black
Sex: Male
Homeworld: Unknown
Alignment: Evil
Clothing: Only a large cloak he wears since he is 86% droid he doesn't wear a lot of clothes
Weapon: A blaster pistol and four lightsabers he owns as trophies from famous jedi he killed.
Non-Force User
Inventory: A small spy probe and a grappelling hook built into his arm.
Posessions:A small one man ship that is called the Predator this ship may be small but it is faster and more dangerous than any jedi starfighter.
Personality: A brilliant strategist unhindered by compassion or scruples and is very aggresive and likes to take advantage of the enemy he is fighting. He likes to see things through to the end but he knows when to back down,and he thinks that regular battle droids are rather useless because they are flimsy and get destroyed easly and they are no good at fighting jedi.
Skills:Grievous hunted Jedi for sport and proudly displayed his victims' lightsabers around his belt as trophies of his conquests. His unorthodox fighting form and mechanical enhancements gave him an edge in close-quarters combat, and his strategic ingenuity and flawless cunning rendered him almost invincible against the Jedi.A twisted melding of flesh and metal, General Grievous' body is a deadly weapon forged by the cutting edge developers of the Confederacy. Within the hardened carapace beats the heart of a remorseless killer. Weaknesses: He cannot use the force,he has a bad cough when he talks because of him haveing flesh/droid lungs,he does not like to think of his past when his wife nearly killed him.And he hates to lose so he tends not to.and he tends to takes things rather personaly.
o O (Spell-checked by Eisley)
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Post by Tempest on Jun 5, 2005 23:19:49 GMT -5
Ok then, is there a place where the sith meet? I noticed that the Sith Hideout thread was empty.
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Post by Cy Otauna on Jun 7, 2005 18:29:46 GMT -5
About Grievous: his species name and homeworld is Kaleesh. And what's this info about his wife? Is this canon?
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Post by Tiana, eh? on Jun 8, 2005 1:23:31 GMT -5
Bleh. The Sith we have appear to be the following.
Shadow Myth Eliaith Cluge (?) Raven (?) Cy (was anyway...)
Shadow's a (no offense to her) pathetic Sith. She had better turn light or I'll kill her. *grins* Myth had a home on Coruscant, as I recall. Cluge is just turning dark, and I'm not certain on Raven, if he's going dark again or not... he's with the Jedi too. So as there's not many Sith, there's not really a meeting place. Eliaith's on Tatooine (my evil alias) (darn, he's fun to play) and he's your best bet for Sithly contact. He probably comes to the Sith hideout once in a while, but he's a new character...
Cy, I'll let you deal with SH in getting Grievous canon.
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Post by Jandalf on Toast on Jun 10, 2005 9:30:22 GMT -5
Thought I'd put in my two cents: it appears as if a copy & paste was done for a section or two in Grievous' bio there. I mean, so long as Grievous holds true to that while you're playing, sithhunter, there shouldn't be a problem, but it IS ideal for someone to write up their own blurb. Makes for a better understanding of the character.
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