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Post by Tiana, eh? on Jun 10, 2005 23:41:09 GMT -5
I agree with Jandalf, there. The wording was more in depth than even I would've wrote, Sithhunter, so it appears you've copied and pasted. If you could consider rewriting those parts... yeah.
I think I'm going to come up with new character sheets anyway. The one we're using at the moment just isn't working. No one's in depth enough anymore, it seems. I think I'll make a sheet for Jedi, one for Sith, one for bounty hunters, one for smugglers... yeah. Just to get the specifics down.
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Post by Dûncariel is Dead. on Jun 11, 2005 16:56:45 GMT -5
Does this mean we must write new ones? Though I have been planning on re-vamping Jendana's, just for my own use...
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Kaiya
Agent of Gondor
"No one is beneath redemption..."
Posts: 185
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Post by Kaiya on Jun 14, 2005 16:09:14 GMT -5
Real Name: Amaara Tesla Nickname: Amaara Title: Senator Age: 24 Species: Mawan Species information: Mawan are humanoids from the planet Mawan. They resemble humans in almost every way. However, Mawans have two hearts instead of one. Their blue veins lie very close to the surface of their pale skin, making them much more visible. The more visible a Mawan’s veins are, the more beautiful they are considered among their species. Height: 5’6” Weight: 115 lbs
--Hair--: Color: Black Style: Straight and shoulder length, often kept up in various complicated styles
Eyes: Blue Gender: Female Handiness: Right handed
--Identifying marks--: Tattoos: None Scars: A few barely visible scars on her torso from her days in the Mawan tunnels. Other: Highly visible blue veins
Homeworld: Mawan Alignment: Good Political Affiliation: Old Republic
--Clothing--: Gown color/style: Low cut v-neck, top portion of the torso is white, bottom of the torso is bright blue, skirt from the waist to the knees is white, underskirt is bright blue, upper arms are bright blue, wide sleeves from the elbow down are white Footwear. Style/color: Flat and feminine white shoes.
Weapon: A single blaster pistol usually hidden somewhere in her garments Lightsaber color: NA Force User or Non-Force User: Non-Force User Inventory: datapad, med kit, comlink Possessions: starship Ship name/class: Euraana/ Mawan cruiser
Personality: Amaara is proper and elegant, filled with grace and wisdom. She strongly supports peace, although in extreme cases she will support an act of violence. She has a strict and stern personality, only lightening up around a few people. As her planet is just recovering from a long period of violence and criminal activity, she is under constant pressure to maintain her planet’s security in the Republic senate. Due to the past of her people, she is a strong supporter of compassion and is always serious concerning matters of other people’s pain or suffering.
Skills: Diplomacy, persuasion Weaknesses: Extreme compassion for suffering peoples, pressure from her planet’s unstable condition, lack of combat expertise
--History:-- Mother: Vellaa Tesla Occupation: Cafe owner Father: Marl Tesla Occupation: Starship mechanic
Basic history: Amaara was born in Naatan, the capital city of Mawan. Her family was in the upper middle class and she had a relatively happy childhood. However, before she could even reach her teens, civil war broke out on the planet. By the war’s end, Amaara was only twelve years old and her world had been decimated. The people failed to recover from the war and couldn’t set up a new government. The cities were destroyed with buildings half way blown apart and the power grid constantly up and down. The entire race moved to the tunnels underground that had previously been used for storage, transportation, fuel lines, and sewage. Gangs and crimelords took over the surface and most of the supplies, leaving the Mawan at their mercy. Amaara and her family moved under Naatan, jobless and homeless. Suddenly poor and without proper food or clothing, they struggled to survive. After only two years of living underground, Amaara’s father committed suicide. Amaara and her mother were barely able to support themselves afterward. When Amaara was sixteen, her mother was killed in one of the gang raids, specifically the gang of Decca the Hutt. Amaara has had a grudge against the Hutts ever since. Orphaned and without any means to support herself, she was taken in by her older cousin Euraana Fall. The two of them managed to survive underground until the Jedi and a Senate committee drove the crimelords from the planet and helped the Mawan move above ground again. At twenty-two years old, Amaara began to help rebuild Naatan and was part of establishing a new government along with the Senate and Euraana. She was chosen to serve as the first Republic senator for this new government. Although Mawan is still unstable and struggling to rebuild, life has become much easier and the conditions are improving with the help of the Republic.
Lover/married: None Occupation, if known: NA Children: None
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Post by Tiana, eh? on Jun 15, 2005 3:13:49 GMT -5
Accepted. And no, if you were accepted before, you don't HAVE to... just we'd like you to add in the extra history details... *grins, winks*
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Post by sithhunter on Jun 15, 2005 18:45:58 GMT -5
My IC post on greivous can it be him fighting a jedi?
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Post by Tiana, eh? on Jun 15, 2005 19:17:54 GMT -5
Yeah it can. As long as there's a bit of dialogue within it as well. I don't care what you do, as long as it fits into canon... relatively.
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darthsauron
Sithly Elf
Sure it's big enough, but look at the location!
Posts: 39
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Post by darthsauron on Jun 16, 2005 20:27:56 GMT -5
Real Name: Program 7 Nickname: Sev Age: 23 hours Species: Hologram Height: none Weight: none Hair: prefers deep black but can change at will Eyes: blue Sex: variable, but likes male best. Homeworld: none Alignment: Neutral Clothing: Holographic emmiters project any clothing he requires Weapon: Confederacy blaster rifle is his weapon of choice Force User or Non-Force User: nfu Inventory: Spare energy cells. Posessions: Holographic emmiter that hangs on his belt to keep him running. Personality: Quiet and contained, doesn't talk unless spoken to. Being created by Jango Fett to do his dirty work, Boba modified him to be his technician and computer slicer. Skills: Can solidify certain patterns of his skin to touch and grab things with. Weaknesses: If his emmiter gets wet, he will dematerialize until his box is dry again.
Approve please, I'm new.
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Post by The Seeker on Jun 17, 2005 23:31:23 GMT -5
Real Name: Nikiia Sanme Nickname: Darth Daemi Title: Darth, Lady, Sith. Age: 21 Species: Galacian Height: 1.69 meters Weight: 125
--Hair--: Color: Really white blond Style: Long with little braids in some places
Eyes: Light green Gender: Female Handiness: Ambidextrious
--Identifying marks--: Tattoos: 2 sith tattoos, one on the right side of the base of her neck, and the other on the left side of the base of her neck. Scars: none Other: none
Homeworld: Gala Alignment: dark (not bad, may be open to becoming good, someday.) Political Affiliation: Sith
--Clothing--: Tunic color/style: Dark Green, down to the middle of her thigh. Underneath that is a light green long sleeved shirt. Pants color/style: Really dark green and tucked into black boots. Cloak/robe, color and style: Black with hood and sleeves. Footwear, style/color: Black boots that go almost all the way up her calves.
Weapons: Double bladed lightsaber, single bladed lightsaber. Lightsaber’s color: green Force User Inventory: Comlink, datapad, poison, security spikes. Possessions: Speeder bike, one customized ship. Ship name/class: Dark Eye, Sith Infiltrator
Personality: Gets angry easily and goes looking for challenges. She might have been a very compassionate person, had she been raised in a loving home, and that sometimes surfaces, even though she might not think that is the case.
Skills: Force push, pull, and jump. She hasn’t been very well skilled with the mental aspect of the force, but she is very attuned to using it outwardly.
Weaknesses: Can be very angry sometimes. And sometimes lets that anger get the best of her in a fight. Her temper is something she struggles with daily. --History:-- Mother: Lesa Sanme Occupation: unknown Father: Brek Sanme Occupation: unknown
Basic history: She was stolen from her family at very young age, so she knows next to nothing about them. A sith kidnapped her when she was a toddler and trained her until she was 17. He thought she was getting too powerful and tried to kill her, he failed and she bested him in a lightsaber duel. Lover/married: unknown Occupation, if known: Sith lord. Children: None
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Post by Cy Otauna on Jun 18, 2005 12:04:39 GMT -5
Guys, start using the new character sheets so u only have to write one.
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Post by The Seeker on Jun 18, 2005 13:57:49 GMT -5
oops. I revised it.
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Post by Jandalf on Toast on Jun 18, 2005 16:58:20 GMT -5
ElementFire - A little more detail in the Skills, Weaknesses, and Basic History departments would be good.
darthsauron - This hologram thing is a fascinating idea. But I'd like to see a little more detail on it for use in RPing, since it's not a typical character. Was Sev made by a private tinkerer? Does he have a droid brain built into the transmitter, or does he work by remote? Is he independent, or does he have a master/owner somewhere? Things like that.
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darthsauron
Sithly Elf
Sure it's big enough, but look at the location!
Posts: 39
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Post by darthsauron on Jun 18, 2005 20:05:46 GMT -5
Ok, but i need someone for him to interact with to say all that. Where should i go?
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Post by Master Audreidi on Jun 18, 2005 22:01:22 GMT -5
Real Name: Audreidi Ytho Nickname: Auddie Title: Jedi Knight Age: 26 Species: Human Height: 5'-10" Weight: 140 lbs
--Hair--: Color: Dark brown Style: Usually worn down, falls to mid-back, wavy but not curly
Eyes: Hazel Gender: Female Handiness: Left handed
--Identifying marks--: Tattoos: None Scars: Some minor scars sustained from training days, mainly on hands and arms Other: —
Homeworld: Chandrila Alignment: Good Political Affiliation: Old Republic
--Clothing--: Tunic color/style: Brown, moderate fit, down to mid-thigh Pants color/style: Darker brown, plain trousers Cloak/robe, color and style: Near-black typical Jedi robe Footwear, style/color: Black calf boots
Weapon: Lightsaber Lightsaber color: Blue Force User Inventory: Comlink, sometimes a datapad for mission-related work Possessions: Ship Ship name/class: Ytho's Hope, a small Nubian yacht
Personality: Audreidi maintains a view of herself as a strictly separate individual, while still working for the better of the galactic community that she sees herself a part of. She is very independent, preferring to work alone at almost all times. Some could argue this is a good thing, since she largely keeps to herself, considering herself affiliated with the Jedi Order and not any one sentient in particular. Not many ever see her sense of humour, as she's often quick to take offense, even if she does hide her irritation well. She carries herself with a strange blend of no-nonsense behaviour and an easy-going demeanour, something that even Audreidi herself occasionally finds rather confusing indeed. With this sort of look at the galaxy and her place in it, it's no surprise that her best friend is her lightsaber.
Skills: Has studied lightsaber combat forms II and IV extensively and is very well-versed in their use; is pragmatic and reliable; good head for tactics
Weaknesses: Though she usually hides it, has a quick temper; sometimes difficult to work with as a group/team; has studied the Living Force without much attention to the Unifying Force
--History:-- Mother: Unknown Occupation: — Father: Unknown Occupation: —
Basic history: As typical with any other Jedi, Audreidi was brought into the Temple in her toddler years and personally remembers little of her origins. She spent her early years in the crèche like most younglings, emerging to become the Padawan of a Gotal Master, Rehara Nomai. However, Master Nomai was killed in a mission shortly after Audreidi was Knighted, finally severing the last close tie that young Ytho shared with anyone.
Lover/married: None Occupation, if known: — Children: None
Will that do? Or do I need more on the history part?
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Eve
Padawan Learner
It takes seconds to break a heart and ages to heal one...
Posts: 19
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Post by Eve on Jun 19, 2005 22:15:09 GMT -5
Real Name: Dakota Jayd Nickname: Some of her older friends from the temple call her Kota to annoy her Title: Jedi Knight Age: 25 Species: Human Height: 5’7” Weight: 125 lbs
--Hair--: Color: Brown Style: Worn down, long and straight with a few small braids
Eyes: Hazel Gender: Female Handiness: Right handed
--Identifying marks--: Tattoos: None Scars: A few scars from both combat training and various animals, mostly on her arms and hands Other: None
Homeworld: Onderon Alignment: Good Political Affiliation: Old Republic
--Clothing--: Tunic color/style: Tan and simple in the style of the Jedi Order Leggings, pants, skirt-- color/style: Dark brown leggings Cloak, robe Color and style: Plain brown, hooded cloak Footwear. Style/color: Brown, knee-high boots
Weapon: Lightsaber Lightsaber color: Veridian Force User or Non-Force User: Force User Inventory: datapad, comlink, med kit, aquata breather Possessions: A collection of animals she’s taken in over several missions, currently including a plumed rasp, bearded jax, durni, gurrcat cub, fanned rawl baby, and langlatch hatchling. She also has a ship that technically belongs to the temple although it’s been in her posession for some time. That ship comes with a small droid named R4-B2 Ship name/class: Jedi starfighter, no name
Personality: Dakota is, for a lack of a better term, the strong, silent type. She’s often quiet, preferring the more subtle forms of communication such as body language, facial expression, and, in some rare cases, telepathy. She finds humans difficult to understand at times when they act on greed or hatred. Because of the gifts of her ancestors, she finds communicating and taming animals quite easy, and often prefers the more simple and natural ways of creatures to the complicated ways of humans. While few in the Order have mastered animal communication through the Force as well as she has, she is almost an outcast among her peers. She prefers the more “wild” missions and rarely visits planets with too much urban activity. She finds Coruscant highly distressing and hard to center herself in, so it is rare that she will visit the Jedi Temple there. She prefers to receive her orders from the Council through long-distance communications. Because she seems so cut off from the more civilized world, it is rare that she has the chance to see another of the Order... and even rarer for her to be comfortable with such a person. She doesn’t understand anything too disconnected from the natural world, and anyone who does usually finds her to be odd company and difficult to get along with. Still, she respects all life and it is rare for her to flat out dislike anyone, no matter how “unnatural” they might be.
Skills: Creature-handling, basic telepathy, Djem So (lightsaber form V) Weaknesses: Emotions (mostly anger), seeing animals abused, crowded places
--History:-- Mother: Farrah Jayd Occupation: Beast-rider Father: Davin Jayd Occupation: Beast-rider
Basic history: Dakota was born on the world of Onderon, a sparsely populated planet belonging to the Republic. Outside of the few cities, Onderon is wild and dangerous, teeming with large predators and some of the most deadly wildlife known in the galaxy. The Beast-Riders were originally criminals banished from the cities and thrown into this harsh environment. While most did not survive, the remaining people learned to coexist with and tame the savage wildlife: boma beasts, cannoks, zakkegs, malras, and drexels as well as many others. Their descendants carried on that knowledge for thousands of years and continued to live in the wilds of the planet. It was this culture that Dakota was born into. Like most Force-sensitives, Dakota was discovered at a young age, although perhaps a little older than most. She was barely four years old when it became apparent that animals were attracted to her, not just because of her people’s culture, but because of Force-sensitivity. She was taken away from the planet and trained on Coruscant. When she was 11, she became a padawan, and when she turned 22 she was given the rank of Jedi Knight. She has since followed the orders of the Jedi Council, assigned to missions on the galaxy’s more untamed worlds.
Lover/married: None Occupation, if known: NA Children: None
I think I managed to get it all. lol.
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Post by The Seeker on Jun 20, 2005 19:48:01 GMT -5
I revised it again.
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Post by Tiana, eh? on Jun 22, 2005 0:42:17 GMT -5
Okay... Element Fire: Tis okay now. Eve: Tis fine, accepted, go ahead. I'd suggest adding a bit more into weaknesses, myself, because the clearer picture you have of your character, the better. I'd especially like more on the emotional weaknesses thing... Audreidi: ...you're VERY skinny. For your height, you should be about 135, or you're going to have ribs showing. *grins* I'd suggest even up to 145-150... and you'll still be slender, depending on your build. I mean, I'll accept you the way you are... but... just thought you might like to know you're going to be a walking skelaton. I don't exactly want that. *grins again* I would really like it if you'd add on ten pounds to your character's build... Darth Sauron: Use the NEW character sheet, if possible, and NO, you do not need to interact with anyone to explain any of that. No one RPs without acceptance, and I know you won't end up explaining in RP anyway. You can explain it all nicely in a long sample story-post, and in history and suchnot, okay? And please, explain how on Kessel a HOLOGRAM can hold a weapon!!!!!!!!!!!! *freaks out* The hologram thing's an interesting idea, but since a hologram is merely light... it couldn't hold anything...
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Post by Tiana, eh? on Jun 23, 2005 21:56:15 GMT -5
Here's the new character sheet for reference-- it is also on the first page.
Real Name: Nickname: Title?: (Master, Knight, Padawan, Apprentice, General, Moff, Colonel, Lord, Lady, Queen, King, Senator whatever...) Age: Species: (must exist within the canon of the Star Wars universe. If lesser known provide name of book or movie or game in which appeared. And try to come up with a picture) If not human, description of any notable differences in appearance and strengths: Height: Weight:
--Hair--: Color: Style:
Eyes: Gender: Handiness: (lefty, right handed, ambidextrous)
--Identifying marks--: Tattoos: Scars: Other:
Homeworld: Alignment: (Good, Evil, Neutral) Political Affiliation: (Jedi, Sith, Republic, Trade Federation, Seperatists, Bounty Hunters Guild...)
--Clothing--: (Tendency to wear what kind of clothes.) Tunic color/style: Leggings, pants, skirt-- color/style: Cloak, robe? Color and style: Footwear. Style/color: Hat/hood. Color/style:
Weapon: (Tendency to use what kind of weapon.) Force User or Non-Force User Inventory: (Items the character carries most of the time.) Possessions: (Ships, Organizations, Droids etc) Ship name/class: Personality: (Do I really have to explain this?) (make sure it's in depth-- characters are easier to play when they have details. Try for at least three sentences) Skills: (Uhh... really... what can you do? Not too many skills now...) (try to have at least one emotional strength too, and how this aids your character, and a couple actual skills. Lockpicking, lightsaber fighting, whatever) Weaknesses: (Gotta have some of these!) (Make sure you have at least one emotional weakness, and write how this effects your character for it to be a weakness) (and lightsabers and blasters and evil guys with big guns do not count as weaknesses!)
--History:-- Mother: (if known) Occupation: Father: (if known) Occupation:
Anything notable about childhood?: Basic history: Lover/married?: Occupation, if known: Children?: (names)
Character portrait: (not necessary, but would be nice if you drew a picture or found a picture on the internet somewhere)
FOR JEDI AND SITH ONLY:
Strongest Force strength: Favorite power: (real power, nothing impossible or all powerful, only one) Other Force powers used sometimes?: Weakest Force point: Tendency to what lightsaber fighting style?: (if you put form whatever or whatever name it has in KotOR II, remember to add in what characteristics it has) Lightsaber color:
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Post by Master Audreidi on Jun 24, 2005 15:29:01 GMT -5
Whups, sorry about that. I think in kilos, not pounds, and I just made a guesstimate. I'll fix it.
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Post by Tiana, eh? on Jun 27, 2005 0:49:52 GMT -5
Well, just look at your sister's weight in lbs if you're curious... I'm 5"2 and 135 lbs and that hardly puts me overweight with a bigger build... does that help? -_- Your character's still unnaturally skinny, in my book... at that height I think she should be at least 150 now, but oh well... it'll do. This is just RP after all...
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Morndakiél
Agent of Gondor
[r9][e21][c33]
Posts: 155
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Post by Morndakiél on Jul 7, 2005 12:03:44 GMT -5
Well, my sheet got deleted when I did, so i'll get around to making a new one in the new version, that ok?
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