Post your Character Sheet here (Old Republic)

[aliasstar]

I know there are a lot of unknown's in this, but my character doesn't remember lots, so please bear with me.
Real Name: Joriene Kitan Tarsha
Nickname: Jori
Title: Ms.?
Age: Unknown, looks to be in her early twenties.
Species: Unknown
If not human, description of any notable differences in appearance and strengths: She doesn’t know what species she is, she doesn’t seem human, because she ages very slowly, and her immune system is very advanced. She looks human though.
Height: 5’11
Weight: 137

--Hair--:
Color: Dark brown with auburn highlights
Style: parted down the middle and about 3 inches
below her shoulders
Eyes: dark brown
Gender: Female
Handiness: Left.

--Identifying marks--:
Tattoos: none
Scars: none
Other: she has a small scaning mark on the back of her neck like a barcode.

Homeworld: Evidently, Alderaan.
Alignment: Neutral
Political Affiliation: None

--Clothing--:
Tunic color/style: White jumpjuit with tan ovals on the thighs.
Leggings, pants, skirt-- color/style:
Cloak, robe? Color and style: White sort of trench coat.
Footwear. Style/color: White boots.
Hat/hood. Color/style:

Weapon: Two vibro blades, small blaster pistol, and martial arts.
Force User
Inventory: Medpacs, rope, emergency rations.
Possessions:
Ship name/class:
Personality: She feels a little lost, sorta shy around strange people, and afraid of what people think of her. Smart and sensitive and caring. Trying to find out who she is, and because she doesn't know exactly who she is, she might be prone to little emotional outbursts every now and then at little insequential things.
Skills: Martial arts, melee fighting, understanding people.
Weaknesses: Needs to believe in herself more, and work on talking to people. Not knowing who or what she is makes her very uncomfortable around most everybody.

--History:--
Mother: Unknown
Occupation:
Father: Unknown.
Occupation:

Anything notable about childhood: No.
Basic history: All that she can remember is in the lab and a few people watching her.
Lover/married: Unknown.
Occupation, if known: Unknown
Children: None.

Character portrait: This is her hair:
And this is her jumpsuit:

[Cy Otauna]

Mmkay, I'd say go for a little more personality relating to the fact that she doesn't know who/what she is; how does she react to that? I'd say that'd be a pretty big weakness too. I think it's alright if she doesn't know all this information as long as you can play it with conviction and aren't just having her know nothing cause you don't know it either.

[aliasstar]

Is it better?

[Jandalf on Toast]

I think it still could be expanded upon a bit more... And going back to this weight issue. Heh. It's certainly possible to be 5'-11" and 122 lb, but unless you want her to be incredibly skinny for a reason, it's unlikely. I'm that height, and 140. Muscles being heavier than fat, weight isn't something to shy away from, especially if she's got a good command of martial arts.

[aliasstar]

Better?

[Jandalf on Toast]

I'm still in agreement with Cy — and on that basis, approved.

[Tiana, eh?]

Uh... on the basis of rules that evidently Jandalf has not yet realized... THREE skills. Not two. You have to have one emotional skill as well... something mentally strong that makes you skilled. You know... um... can tell when someone's lying, is easy to talk to, a good listener... WHATEVER.

Again, I post.

Three skills, and one has to be emotional.
Three weaknesses, and one has to be emotional.
At least three sentenses for personality, and they should balance each other out.

And listen to Jandalf you must on the weight issue.

I'm done.

[aliasstar]

Is it better now? *winces*

[The Seeker]

I'm redoing my character sheet, is it okay if I change my species?

[Tiana, eh?]

Yes and yes.

[aliasstar]

YES!!! *runs off to RPG*
Would someone please find me? I know that sounds weird, but I'll be in Alderaan.
Edit: Never mind, I relocated my char to... I don't know where.
Edit: Maanan, she's on Maanan.

[darthsauron]

I've been reading the temple and taken a great intrest in this char. please approve.

Real Name: Garii Haldor
Nickname: none
Title: Sith Maurauder
Age: 37 human years
Species: Human
Height: 7'
Weight: 198

--Hair--:
Color:Dirty blonde
Style: short culrs

Eyes: dull grey
Gender: male
Handiness: right

--Identifying marks--:
Tattoos: a Tatoo of a knife runnig down his spine
Scars: one around his wrist where his hand was severed and been grown back by bacta.
Other:

Homeworld:
Alignment: Evil
Political Affiliation: Sith

--Clothing--: Sith travel wear
Tunic color/style: black tunic with belt.
Leggings, pants, skirt-- color/style: pants, black loose.
Cloak, robe? Color and style: Black cloak with hood large enough to hide his face.
Footwear. Style/color:black boots.
Hat/hood. Color/style: black hood. he likes black!

Weapon: Sith darksabre.
Force User
Inventory: small shield emmitter that provides minor protection against blasters, and darksabre spring to shoot it to his hand.
Possessions: Had a ship. Used it to cover his escape. Can steal another.
Ship name/class: unknown
Personality: Extremely arrogant. Belevies he is above everybody which led to his rivalry with Alex.
Skills: Nearly unmatched with his darksabre, grea understanding of the Force, and his emotions fuel his body, giving him an edge in combat.
Weaknesses: His arrogance makes him think he's invincible, when he's not.

--History:--
Mother: undisclosed
Occupation: Killinyouguys!
Father: nottellingyou!
Occupation: Sith. Pays well.

Anything notable about childhood?: Raised in Jedi temple.
Basic history: Became rival with alex and turned darkside.
Lover/married?: no
Occupation, if known: scroll up people.
Children?: flatly:no

Character portrait: will look for one.

FOR JEDI AND SITH ONLY:

Strongest Force strength: Force Crush
Favorite power: Force cloak. Can shiled his force-sensitivity.
Other Force powers used sometimes?: push, jump, pull, the neurtals.
Weakest Force point: force storm.
Tendency to what lightsaber fighting style?: ((I'm using JKJA styles here)) Fast.
Lightsaber color: using a combination of crystals, he made a blade with an orange glow with a red coating bouncing up and down giving the illusion of fire.

[sithhunter]

That sounds ok i approve you D.S.

[Jandalf on Toast]

Actually, readdressing a former my-bad...

Three skills, and one has to be emotional.
Three weaknesses, and one has to be emotional.
At least three sentenses for personality, and they should balance each other out.

And listen to Jandalf you must on the weight issue.

The criteria for personality and weaknesses haven't been filled in yet. Neither, apparently, has Garii, unless you're aiming for a rail-thin Sith. Basic history is sketchy, look here to pick a type of lightsaber fighting style, and hands can't really be grown back by bacta. They can be healed, yes, but not completely restored if they've been completely crushed/mangled/chopped off. It'll have to be a cybernetic replacement.

[Tiana, eh?]

Also, addressing one more thing...

Only a few particular moderators are allowed to accept character sheets, as most of them do not have the required strengths in writing and aren't mean enough themselves to know what's good and what's not and to say it.

The permitted moderators for character sheet approval are as follows:

Celebrian
Tiana Calthye
Jandalf
Cy Skywalker
Shadow
Forca Kenobi

Because I know they have the writing strengths to approve... and I think all of them know the rules.

So, Darth Sauron...

Weight.
No hand grown back by bacta, tis impossible.
At least expand on what your tunic looks like... we'd like to know what your sleeves are like, and the shape of the neckline. Sleeves because they can effect battles, and neckline because... well... because it's noticable.
Personality should be longer and more indepth, rather than stating the weaknesses again.

And Jandalf quoted the rest. Three of each...

As everyone misunderstands this...

Mother: (HER NAME)
Occupation: (HER OCCUPATION, IF KNOWN)
Father: (HIS NAME)
Occupation: (HIS OCCUPATION!!!)

Anything notable about childhood?: (IF ANYTHING WEIRD HAPPENED, SUCH AS HE FELL DOWN A SET OF STAIRS AND LOST HIS MEMORY. )
Basic history: (SHOULD BE A COUPLE SENTENSES, EVEN IF JUST TO SAY WHERE HE WAS BORN AND WHY HE LEFT THERE, OR WHY HE STAYED THERE, OR WHATEVER)
Lover/married?:
Occupation, if known: (HIS LOVER/WIFE'S OCCUPATION!!)
Children?:

There. I've stated what the point of that piece is.

And I'd like to see at least two sentenses for history...

Weakest Force point: force storm.

Nope. I mean a full out piece of the Force... not one power. Not very good at sensing the future, no good at healing, can't levitate things, or something... that's what I want.

And see Jandalf's link for the lightsaber fighting thing.

There. Now you have my opinion.

[Cy Otauna]

I show agreenessness.

[BEHIND YOU!!!]

I'm allowed to aprove? Cool...

[Cy Otauna]

Do the other Powers That Admin want me to play a council member for the people that are in need of one? I can get a sheet up for Kit Fisto or somebody in a few femtos.

[Jandalf on Toast]

However many femtos it ends up taking you, that might be a very handy thing indeed. Yay!

[BEHIND YOU!!!]

What the heck is a femto? Anything like those little red things in cans of french beans?