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Post by Chelsegorn on Mar 13, 2006 13:57:00 GMT -5
I haven't posted many of my works on the net, so the more positive feedback I get the more I'll post! I'll try to update my story once a week. Just so you know. Hope you liked it!!!
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Post by Tiana, eh? on Mar 16, 2006 0:48:01 GMT -5
Hm.... a couple things. I'm not going to give you my full critique, as I do to anyone I know will take it without offence, but I am going to say that you need to double space it. When posting on the internet, indents don't show up, so you need to double space everything, like when posting on a forum.
Other than that... er... it's odd. I'm not tired enough to fully appreciate my old Candies of Doom styled humor... Heh. Treasure Island spoof, I guess?
IF YOU LIKE SPOOFS/PRATCHETT LIKE WORK, READ MY POSTED STORY ON HERE!!! [/spam]
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Post by Dûncariel is Dead. on Apr 5, 2006 19:28:30 GMT -5
*snickers*
Life can't get much crappier...
*was rather tired*
Holy bad puns, Batman, but that was rather amusing... and aside from a couple of weird commas and weirder spelling mistakes, it was well written, as well.
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