Reviews for Arius and the Truth Dec 28, 2006 20:37:42 GMT -5 Quote Select PostDeselect PostLink to PostMemberGive GiftBack to Top Post by Mundane Soul of a Thousand on Dec 28, 2006 20:37:42 GMT -5 OKay, I hate this story, and I think it's poorly written on my part. NOt something I'd normally do, unless it was one of my stupid short stories (which are the best, in my opinion). But I often wonder what you guys think. What could I have done to make it better? What don't I need? Blah. See this more as a constructive criticism. Mark my words, this is the first time I'd ever take someones opinions/advice very seriously.